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All material in this document is the intellectual property of Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd. The use of informationand content in this document in whole or in part is forbidden unless express permission has been given inwriting by Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd.www.enago.com | www.enago.jp | www.enago.com.tr | www.enago.com.br | www.enago.de |www.enago.tw | www.enago.cn | www.enago.co.kr | www.enago.ruTHE ZIGBEE PROTOCOLZigbee Alliance is a group of companies specializing in semiconductors, softwaredevelopment, and original equipment manufacturers (OEMs) that has created the TheZigBeeBee standard. has been come with with the ZigBee Alliance, they made up manymember companies, from semiconducting industry and software developers to originalequipment manufacturers (OEMs). They The ZigBee are standards are designed for to ensureinexpensivelow costness, low -power, and low -data rate networking. Devices of ZigBeedevices operate in the industriesindustrial, science scientific, and medical (ISM) radiobandingbands: 868 MHz of in Europe, 915 MHz for in North America, and 2.4 GHz inworldwide. [2] The ZigBee standard operates for thein the IEEE 802.15.4 physical radiospecifications,. which The specifics describes the physical layer (PHY) protocol functionswith and the interactions with the medium access control layer (MAC) layer and . Moreover,it also defines the minimum hardware-level requirements, like such as the receiver sensitivityand the transmitter output power. The mModulations used in IEEE 802.15.4 are BPSK(binary phase shift keying) (BPSK), ASK (amplitude shift keying) (ASK), and O-QPSK(offset quadrature phase shift keying (O-QPSK)). [2] One of the major benefits in of usingZigBeeBee are is the low cost, that which allows for its wide wide range deployedapplications in wireless monitoring and control. ZigBee devices can activate (pass from sleepmode to active mode) in a very quick time (15 mseconds) so that they have been allotted canwith more sleep most of the time,. This makes it possible to have apreserving the use ofpower and thus, providing them long-lasting battery life, typically lasting for years.HARDWARE IMPLEMENTATIONComment [A1]: The original sentence describesthat Zigbee standard and Zigbee Alliance are twodifferent charters that unite to form a cluster ofcompanies. There are many errors in this statement:(a) has been come is an incorrect tense; the moreappropriate phrase can be has been developed/wasdeveloped by; (b) they made up is incorrect; thebetter phrasing can be Zigbee is a group ofcompanies in the fields of.Comment [A2]: The hyphen in between is notnecessary. Low is an adjective to the noun power; acompound low-power is oftentimes an adjective.For example, low-power system.Comment [A3]: For brevity, we can remove thisportion and substitute with a conjunction.Comment [A4]: One is a singular indefinitepronoun in this case; it should agree with a singularverb.Comment [A5]: Units are usually abbreviatedwhen reporting numerical information.
All material in this document is the intellectual property of Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd. The use of informationand content in this document in whole or in part is forbidden unless express permission has been given inwriting by Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd.www.enago.com | www.enago.jp | www.enago.com.tr | www.enago.com.br | www.enago.de |www.enago.tw | www.enago.cn | www.enago.co.kr | www.enago.ruMaster/slave is a model for aof communication protocol that involves one a device or aprocess (known as the master) controlling one or more devices or processes (known as theslaves). However, after thHere,e master/slave association was set up, the the direction ofcontrol will always be is always from the master to the slaves to the slaves. In the sSystemsbuilt in the hardware components of ZigBee devices comprise a created it has two partsrespecting to this model: a Master model module and a Slave modelmodule.The slave system device will beis placed in the field and willto measure count humidity,temperature, and light intensity data, which are then light. This data will be transmitted overthe air, with using ZigBeeBee, to the master systemdevice. The Upon receipt, the masterdevice travels sends the transmitted data to the a personal computer (PC) for real-timeprocessing. where it will be processed in real. Comment [A6]: Brevity and conciseness isimportant for journals due to space allocation foraccepted manuscripts. Clarity of thoughts andconsistency are also major factors in creating afluent and effective text.
All material in this document is the intellectual property of Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd. The use of informationand content in this document in whole or in part is forbidden unless express permission has been given inwriting by Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd.www.enago.com | www.enago.jp | www.enago.com.tr | www.enago.com.br | www.enago.de |www.enago.tw | www.enago.cn | www.enago.co.kr | www.enago.ruTHE ZIGBEE PROTOCOLThe ZigBee standard has been created come with withby the ZigBee Alliance, they made upthat is a group of many member companies, including the from semiconductoring industry,and software developers, and to original equipment manufacturers (OEMs). Thesey arestandards are designed for inexpensivelow costness, low -power, and low -data ratenetworking. Devices of ZigBee devices operate in the industriesindustrial, science scientific,and medical (ISM) radio bandingbands: 868 MHz of in Europe, 915 MHz for in NorthAmerica, and 2.4 GHz in worldwide. [2] The ZigBee standard operates for thein the IEEE802.15.4 physical radio specifications. Thise specifics specification describes the physicallayer (PHY) protocol functions with and the interactions with the medium access controllayer (MAC) layer. Moreover, it also defines the minimum hardware-level requirements, likesuch as the receiver sensitivity and the transmitter output power. The mModulations used inIEEE 802.15.4 are BPSK (binary phase shift keying) (BPSK), ASK (amplitude shift keying)(ASK), and O-QPSK (offset quadrature phase shift keying (O-QPSK)). [2] One of the majorbenefits in of using ZigBeeBee are is the low cost that allows for it to be wide deployed inwireless monitoring and control. ZigBee devices can activate (pass from sleep mode to activemode) in a very quick time (15 mseconds); therefore, so they can sleep most of the time. ,This makesmaking it possible to have a long-lasting battery life, typically lasting for years.HARDWARE IMPLEMENTATIONMaster/slave is a model for aof communication protocol that involves one a device or aprocess (known as the master) controlling one or more devices or processes (known as theslaves). However, aAfter the master/slave association was is set up, the direction of controlwill always be is always from the master to the slaves to the slaves. In the created systems,the hardware component created it has two parts respecting corresponding to this model: aMaster model module and a Slave modelmodule.Comment [A1]: The hyphen in between is notnecessary. Low is an adjective to the noun power; acompound low-power is oftentimes an adjective.For example, low-power system.Comment [A2]: For brevity, we can remove thisportion and substitute a conjunction.Comment [A3]: One is a singular indefinitepronoun in this case; it should agree with a singularverb.Comment [A4]: Units are normally written in SI;thus, milliseconds should be ms.
All material in this document is the intellectual property of Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd. The use of informationand content in this document in whole or in part is forbidden unless express permission has been given inwriting by Crimson Interactive Pvt. Ltd.www.enago.com | www.enago.jp | www.enago.com.tr | www.enago.com.br | www.enago.de |www.enago.tw | www.enago.cn | www.enago.co.kr | www.enago.ruThe slave system device will beis placed in the field and willto measure count humidity,temperature, and light intensity light. This data will beare transmitted over the air, with usingZigBeeBee, to the master systemdevice. The master device travels passes the transmitted datato the a PC for real-time processing. where it will be processed in real.
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